We must motivate Vagas and Midori.

We need to give Vagas and Midori more reason to help the animals in the zoo than just kindness. What might give them both a better reason to want to help the animals?

1.    Did they have a pet that was given to the zoo?

2.    Have they helped the zoo in the past?

3.    Are they connected to the zoo in some way?

4.    Have they had some experience in the past that would make them especially sensitive to the plight of the zoo          animals?

Problem 2:

It is important to show positive changes in the behavior of Rason and Zealda. We can make them ugly and unpleasant in the beginning, but how will we develop their characters to show change (conversion)? How will they improve? What event will cause them to improve? What will we write into the book to show that they have changed?